tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392515043585201041.post2533455754817108340..comments2023-10-22T05:22:06.766-07:00Comments on Gennifer Albin - Author: On the Sixth Day of QuerymasAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01409715190075023845noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392515043585201041.post-31812221210900408832011-12-18T19:05:13.000-08:002011-12-18T19:05:13.000-08:00Awesome story! I am very intrigued but agree with ...Awesome story! I am very intrigued but agree with Gen's critique. Especially the title comment. If I Stay and Before I Fall sound like YA titles and I think you could evoke more of the same feeling if you just shortened your title to something like "The Staircase" or "On the Stairs". <br><br>Though, of course, you can always wait and get title help from your publisher.Laura Barnesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392515043585201041.post-63550570614948643012011-12-20T01:08:55.000-08:002011-12-20T01:08:55.000-08:00Hi Stacy! Looks like you plumped this up a little ...Hi Stacy! Looks like you plumped this up a little :)<br><br>Good query. <br><br>Genn--I'm learning so much from your critiques. Thanks for sharing your time and knowledge.Margienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392515043585201041.post-3903492777713243172011-12-20T09:16:34.000-08:002011-12-20T09:16:34.000-08:00You're welcome Margie!You're welcome Margie!Gennifer Albinnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4392515043585201041.post-17734966026876872872011-12-20T11:10:38.000-08:002011-12-20T11:10:38.000-08:00Gennifer - thanks so much for taking the time to r...Gennifer - thanks so much for taking the time to review this. I really appreciate your input and will take your comments to heart. Happy holidays, and thanks for taking the time to do this for all of us aspiring writers! :)SStokesnoreply@blogger.com